Sunday, June 10, 2012

Somewhere deep in my heart, the GOOD and the BAD fight..

I don't write a poem usually and the few I wrote still are limited to my school magazine. But, I don't know how and why a struggle between two parts of my heart finally ended into a poem. Before this poem loose its power to express and I find something more interesting to post in here, I hope it's better to share my poem with you all. Hope you all like it and share your views about the same.


Somewhere deep in my heart,
the GOOD and the BAD fight,
the one who is stronger takes my ride,

the BAD in me compares with A,
the GOOD in me says to share with A,

the BAD says, 'A has been rude',
the GOOD in me says, 'A has earlier been cute',

the BAD says, 'A has been lying to you',
the GOOD says, 'A has been caring for you',

the BAD says, 'A has made you weep',
the GOOD says, 'A has helped you on its tip',

the BAD says, 'A has hurted you',
the GOOD says to forgive A... and just smile :)

Somewhere deep in my heart,
the GOOD and the BAD fight,
the one who is stronger takes my ride...

5 comments:

  1. good use of the word, good and bad, good one :)

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  2. good poem vishal but best part is through your blog i could see your photo otherwise mujhe two shoes hi dikhte the

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    1. Ha ha ha :) Thanx a lot ma'am.. Photo is toh just virtual, will try to meet u soon..

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  3. Nice post, clearly plagiarism should not have a home. It is not painful to be nice enough and reckon homage for every content that is not yours.

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